Sisterhood
What you mean to me,
Is something I can’t explain,
You are someone I look up to,
And have so much to gain,
You are like my superhero,
To call for when I’m in distress
Your humble words encourage me,
When I my mind is in a mess,
I can never imagine,
This weary world without you here,
In my heart there will always be,
An older sister living near,

Use more figurative language!! You are telling, not showing the reader!
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