Sunday, February 28, 2010

Free Verse

Sisterhood

What you mean to me,

Is something I can’t explain,

You are someone I look up to,

And have so much to gain,

You are like my superhero,

To call for when I’m in distress

Your humble words encourage me,

When I my mind is in a mess,

I can never imagine,

This weary world without you here,

In my heart there will always be,

An older sister living near,

1 comment:

  1. Use more figurative language!! You are telling, not showing the reader!

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